What have you learned from your audience feedback?

The various comments recieved from the social networking site Facebook include:
"Some of the sections really made me want to know more about the characters involved, good job"   S Woole
"It was ok, but it could have done with better construction of the interview and the Danny No scenes." A Locke
"Very well made, it's just a shame that I wasnt in it!" G Bonnefoy
"The plot seemed a bit jumpy, which may have worked in its favour actually" O Kent
"I enjoyed it, and wouldn't mind actually watching it" L Walker

General Points
You can tell from the very star what genre the trailer is of, that of a dark action. The genre is also useful in comprehending what the rest of the trailer is like, and the type of conventions it will follow. The trailer showed two characters that would feature heavily in the movie if it was ever made, and also mentioned another important character called Danny. This sets up the characteristics and the various changes that would take place, not only in the trailer, but also in any future production. Lastly the the way in which the interrogation scenes start and finish the piece off ts very similar to other film trailers, and is a quite common convention of the genre

Strengths
The strengths that the audience had identified included the section with the various voices in the main characters head. This added to the fact that it was not a straight forward superhero film, and was slightly more inclined to be akin to a psychological thriller and added an aura of unease around the character, something that made out the character to not be wholly moral. The use of vlogging within the trailer was liked by the audience who noted that it is only a recent trend for that type of shot to be used, which also showed that the characters mental state was changing. The music had been slowly building up to the dramatic finish of the trailer. The audience noted that this was very similar to many other action films, but also akin to several horror films as well.

Weaknesses
The second interrogation scene was noted as being far too long and that the overall volume was too quite, which took the audience away from focusing on the plot of the trailer, leaving them a little disjointed. This was mainly due to the program that was used at the time could not pick up the video footage very well in the final cut.

Weaknesses
2nd interrogation too long and quiet