Tuesday, 11 December 2012

Story Idea 3

At school, the boy is in a sociology lesson learning about gangs and crime, this obviously strikes a nerve for him, so when the teacher asks him what his opinion is, he responds with single words associated to bad things. Halfway through his wording, a boy in his class tells him to shut his mouth because he is being disrespectful, to which he is responded to with a witty comeback, after a brief row the boy lashes out he keeps punching and no one can get him off and meanwhile he does not let the other boy get a hit in. The boy sends him to hospital and is on his final warning, due to recent events he is not kicked out, the boy is confronted by his friend, and she asks him about what all of the aggression in class was about, a conversation ensues and the boy tells her about his act the other night, she is shocked an angry at him for putting himself in danger, and tells him that there is nothing he can do to resurrect their dead friend and violence isn’t the answer. The boy walks away without saying a word.


At a warehouse late at night, more of the gang are mucking around and doing antisocial things, when all of a sudden they hear a smash and metal crunching, as they walk up to the door to open it, the find that the door is rigged to explode and set off smoke. Accidentally setting it off, the frantically swing and fire their weapons and fists shouting at the intruder as they are picked off one by one. As the smoke dies down the gang members on the outside of the smoke can only see the unconscious bodies of the gang members, as the three of them walk up to the unresponsive bodies, one of the bodies jumps up and karate chops the gang member above him in the neck and before the other two can fire their weapons, they are swiftly beaten up, the intruder picks up a pistol from the floor.


Above in a small room, the gang leader is smoking with two other members when another member rushes through the door frantically warning them that there is an intruder. The leader and his guards shrug it off laughing at him when from behind the messenger, the intruder puts him in a headlock and holds the pistol to his head, and the two guards raise their weapons. The leader laughs at the stupid attempt to kill him and that he doesn’t care if the messenger dies, the messenger is instantly shot by the guards as the intruder immediately shoots the light. The room is very dark but is visible enough to see the outline of people. The leader mocks the intruder telling him that he is good but it’s only a matter of time before he dies. The leader lights his desk lamp to find that both of his guards are unconscious on the floor. The leader panics, telling the intruder to show their self. The intruder from under the desk quickly pulls the legs of the leader and as the leader falls, he hits his head on the radiator, dazing him. The intruder tells him about a murder he committed the other day on three teens, the leader groggily insists that he doesn’t know what the intruder is talking about. The intruder shoots him in the foot. As the leader cries out in pain, the intruder grabs the leader’s shirt and pulls him closer being as intimidating as possible. The leader eventually confesses telling him that the teens life was meaningless and it didn’t matter if he was dead or not. While laughing, the intruder grabs a bottle of whiskey, a glass, a cigarette and a lighter as the leader tells the intruder that he would be good for the gang. The intruder agrees, as he hands him the cigarette, glass and whiskey bottle.

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